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He watched the world through pain hooded eyes
Hiding fromt he hate
And ignoring the lies
Purple eyes closed as the hurt became to much
He held himself gently
Desperate for a tender touch.
Dragging himself upright he gasps as the twinge
A masochist in agony
He found the joy over before it begins
His steps were labored as he ran through the night
Trying desperately
To forget about the fight
Sometimes being immortal can be undesiarable
When the only man you love
Finds you uncompliable.
The fit of rage was so much worse then the last
He finds his strengh fading
And gives in to the inevitable collapse
The footsteps he hears coming
Bring a tightness to his chest
He knows this strong football
So much better then the rest
He closes his eyes and braces himself for the blow
But the hand he now feels
Expresses the love thats rarely shown.
He looks at the unmasked face
At the stiches and the eyes
He lets his tears fall
Dropping his disguise
A quiet "I'm so sorry" is whispered in his ear
He is pulled into a warm lap
as he lets go of his fear.
Yeah...its a poem
~emoish mood~

In case you didn't notice its in Hidan's point of view after Kakuzu beats the shit of him...

Goodbye.
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franktheorgyking Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
Awesome! Thanks!
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TearsOfBlood22 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
amazing...
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Akatsukilover1204 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OMG! *favourites* This is Ah-may-zing!!!! :3
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yukidensetsu Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011
... *favourites, then throws a party for its awesomeness*
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TsumiAkuma Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2011
Awwww, Kuzu-chan is sorry Hidan <3
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KiraKunaSkylights Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011
awwwww :)/:( how kawaii :) <3333 *dropping dead in pure addiction*
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krisscat Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010
super poem!!
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yaoi-chaaaan Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2010
so sad......
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lxi98 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
kawaii!!! Thats so cute! :clap:
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samurai-ninja-sama Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
T^T
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Sarafan206 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2011  Student General Artist
i like your signature... i'm like that too XD
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i-hypo-jashinist Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
waaaaaa
i cant help read it over and over
it make me happy ^^
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fr00tsnak Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2008   Digital Artist
Awww! Sweet! TT^TT
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:iconunperfectlyporcelain:
thank you =D
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bloodyrazorblades15 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
that's awesome.mind if i tweak it some to make a song?i'll give you full credit for it.
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:iconunperfectlyporcelain:
Sure, go ahead.
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bloodyrazorblades15 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
sweet! thanx!
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wacpokemon Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2008
omg wonderful >w<
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:iconunperfectlyporcelain:
Yay ^.^ thank you!
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wacpokemon Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2008
hehe welcome. :D
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hunter-chan Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
kyaaaaaaa! cuuute!! *faint*
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:iconunperfectlyporcelain:
Yay ^-^ thank you!!
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hunter-chan Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
you're wellcome! I ally love it! ^-^
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akatsuki-fan10 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
ttttttttttttthank yooooooooooou so much!
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UnPerfectlyPorcelain Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
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here you go ^-^

and your welcome xD
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akatsuki-fan10 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
iiiiiiiiiii loved it!Will you make it into a fanfiction
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:iconunperfectlyporcelain:
UnPerfectlyPorcelain Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008
Hmm...I hadn't thought about it, but sure ^-^

I have nothing else to do so it could very possibly be done by tonight...xD
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Lizz-Eru Featured By Owner May 27, 2008
Ahwwwwwwwwwwww ;~;
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ILoveYou<3
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